I made a new site :)

I made a new website (for free) and I need to get a heads up view from some of you so I know if its good or not. I'm sure a little constructive criticism won't hurt.

click right here to see the site.

*clicks* WTF. MY EYES. MY EYES!

Prispeval Runway1R, 02.03.2012 at 14:15

*clicks* WTF. MY EYES. MY EYES!

Whats this mean? is the bad design is bad?

Prispeval Deray YG, 02.03.2012 at 14:51

Prispeval Runway1R, 02.03.2012 at 14:15

*clicks* WTF. MY EYES. MY EYES!

Whats this mean? is the bad design is bad?

Yes.

Prispeval Runway1R, 02.03.2012 at 14:53

Yes.

Plz tell me how I can improve it. (I edited it a bit today to *hint* no more background music)

I actually kinda like the design. The bright colours are a bit of a slap in the face when coming from the dark afterwind pages but it's not really a bad design or anything

Prispeval Counterpart, 02.03.2012 at 15:42

I actually kinda like the design. The bright colours are a bit of a slap in the face when coming from the dark afterwind pages but it's not really a bad design or anything

Thx bro

Praises:

• I like the colours at the top & bottom of most pages.
  
• The fonts are decent--on the menu that is. Title text is meh, you should make a nice logo and put it there instead.
  
• I like the overriding theme of "Lil vs World". A rebellious statement, perhaps? An excellent artistic consideration on your part--nice one.

Criticisms:

• Inconsistent house style (just for the first page really)
  
• Redundant pages (have pretty much nothing in them, like the "Members" section which I can't find a use for at all).
  
• The first page is butt-ugly. That image in the background really shouldn't repeat. Surely there is something else that will tickle your nipple and is of much higher resolution.
  
• "Forums" (should be forum, the word has no plural), "Blog" and "Calendar" are all below the main menu, at least in Firefox which creates a jarringly horrendous sight.
  
• It says "we" under "Contact"... but it's just you, son!
  
• Webs sucks. Use FreeHostingNoAds instead. It sounds a bit like a scam with a name like that but it's not, it's truly an excellent web host. And it's free, without any ads (unlike Webs, though I block them anyway).

Prispeval YOBA, 02.03.2012 at 17:17

I like the overriding theme of "Lil vs World". A rebellious statement, perhaps? An excellent artistic consideration on your part--nice one.

Thank you thats what I was going for

Prispeval YOBA, 02.03.2012 at 17:17

The first page is butt-ugly. That image in the background really shouldn't repeat. Surely there is something else that will tickle your nipple and is of much higher resolution.

I also tried to get rid of this but I can't find a way to raise the resolution.

Prispeval YOBA, 02.03.2012 at 17:17

"Forums" (should be forum, the word has no plural), "Blog" and "Calendar" are all below the main menu, at least in Firefox which creates a jarringly horrendous sight.

It says "we" under "Contact"... but it's just you, son!

Even with all my editing I somehow missed those mistakes :/

Prispeval YOBA, 02.03.2012 at 17:17

Webs sucks. Use FreeHostingNoAds instead. It sounds a bit like a scam with a name like that but it's not, it's truly an excellent web host. And it's free, without any ads (unlike Webs, though I block them anyway).

If this one doesn't work I will go there

Forum has a plural, fora

Forums have now been changed to "Forum"
Trying to find the "We" under "contact"

Done*

Prispeval Aristosseur, 02.03.2012 at 18:23

Forum has a plural, fora

Yes, but it is a forum smartass, not 2 or more of them. Also, that's an invented plural and not valid in the English language. Get your facts straight.

Prispeval YOBA, 03.03.2012 at 09:26

Prispeval Aristosseur, 02.03.2012 at 18:23

Forum has a plural, fora

Yes, but it is a forum smartass, not 2 or more of them. Also, that's an invented plural and not valid in the English language. Get your facts straight.

The general discussion is a different forum from offtopic, therefore fora.
http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/fora#English
Noun
fora
Plural form of forum.
The usage notes are for the plain english cultural marxism movement.

Please make a vid when u show ur face cuz ur pic are always diffirent nigga's

P.S u had a pic with a white guy on it one time ( )

Bai and wish you luck!

Prispeval pentation, 18.03.2012 at 11:23

Please make a vid when u show ur face cuz ur pic are always diffirent nigga's

P.S u had a pic with a white guy on it one time ( )

Bai and wish you luck!

I haven't made a vid showing my face but I have shown it. (Pic of how u say white guy, but happens to be half black half white and turned out Albino.) I'm not ashamed of how I look, but rather bored of it. And by this I mean I spent about 1 month getting me a 6-pack then 4 months of poking it to see how it feels. (like a rock) Now I'm going to see if I can make myself able to do 1 arm push-ups again. (Cuz I could do it when I was like 6 or 8 years old but stopped and forgot my balance XD)

Probably not gonna make that video by the way. I kinda don't wanna

Dont wanna troll but a sixpack in 1month is actually impossible

PS it's ok that u dun show ur face lol i'm not a stalker kbai

Prispeval pentation, 19.03.2012 at 06:48

Dont wanna troll but a sixpack in 1month is actually impossible

PS it's ok that u dun show ur face lol i'm not a stalker kbai

It is possible. I've done it. (Not to mention its like I have steroids already in my blood so I don't have to take them pills to gain muscle fast. This also lets by pretty lazy most of the time and work out only a few times a month to keep my all my muscle. )

I got an idea: show ur sixpack and prove it's you by drawing Lild on it

Prispeval pentation, 19.03.2012 at 08:32

I got an idea: show ur sixpack and prove it's you by drawing Lild on it

lol like a tatoo or somethin?

Doesnt need to, just prove its your belly button i see.

Prispeval pentation, 19.03.2012 at 08:39

Doesnt need to, just prove its your belly button i see.

Belly button? wtf

Trolling ._. just wanna see ur abs ?

Prispeval pentation, 19.03.2012 at 11:54

Trolling ._. just wanna see ur abs ?

1 quick question...... are you male or female?

Im a shemale. ._.

This is getting pretty off-topic